合格まっしぐら英作文教室(H27/4/13~4/19)

(掲示が遅くなってすいません!週末にやって下さいね。)

今週の課題

問1  和文英訳

英会話の練習を目的に、見ず知らずの日本人から話しかけられる事ほどいやなことはない、と日本在住の外国人は言う。

問2 自由英作文

人類にとってあなたが最も良かったと思う発明品は何ですか?その発明品の名前と、あなたがそれを選んだ理由を書きなさい。(文字数は皆さんの志望校の出題傾向に従って下さい)

2 thoughts on “合格まっしぐら英作文教室(H27/4/13~4/19)”

  1. Foreigners who visit Japan say that it is not as trouble as be spoken to by Japanese people for the purpose of English training.

    The best invention I think is bicycle. Because everyone can buy it cheaply and ride it easily. And everyone can’t ride car and motorcycle without license. But bicycle doesn’t need license. As I have explained, bicycle seems to have only good points. But vehicle can’t avoid accident. We need to more carefully.
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    Thank you, Carp. Here is the correction:

    Foreigners who visit Japan say that nothing is as troublesome as to be spoken to by Japanese people so that they can practice their English.

    (for the purpose of だと、for the purpose of their practicing English となりpractice one’s English が使えなくなるので、so thatを使った方が良いとのことです)

    I think the best invention is the bicycle(発明品なのでtheがいる). Everyone can buy one(itは不可) cheaply and ride it easily. We can’t drive a car or a motorcycle without a license. But a bicycle doesn’t require a license.

    (needではなくrequire方が良いそうです)
    (ある程度論じたら、結論に持って行く)

    As I have explained, bicycles(複数形にする) seem to have only good points. So I think the bike is the best invention.

  2. 問1
    The foreigners who live in Japan say that they feel the most frustrated,
    When Japanese whom they don’t know speak to them in order to practice english.
    問2
    I think the greatest invention is TV.
    TV enables us to watch things which happen in distant place.
    For example,when we eat dinner at home we watch soccer game in Germany or some animals which live in foreign countris.
    There is a liveliness on TV not as a picture.
    So, TV helps us clearly understand unknown things.
    Therefore ,I think the greatest invention is TV.
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    ・遅くなってすいません。ゴールデンウイークでネイティブの先生がお休みでした。

    Thank you, Take. Here is the correction:

    問1
    (間違いはありませんでした〜拍手!)
    
The foreigners who live in Japan say that they feel the most frustrated when Japanese people whom they don’t know speak to them in order to practice their English.


    問2


    I think the greatest invention is TV.

    TV enables us to watch things which are happening in distant places(placeは一般的な意味なので複数形にする).
    
For example, when we eat dinner at home, we can watch soccer games from (inだとドイツに滞在中になってしまう) Germany or animals (someは付けない方が良い)from other countries(which lives…より、from Germany との対句にして、from other countriesにした方がきれいにまとまります).

    (There is a liveliness on TV not as a picture.の 「not as」 は unlike が良い。livelinessでは動いている画像のことを表現できない)

    Unlike pictures, TV can send out lively images in motion.
    So TV helps us understand things more clearly.

    Therefore, I think the greatest invention is TV.                                           

    <全文>下の正しい英文を何度も音読しましょう。するとどんな風な英作文が優れているかが自然に分かるようになります。言葉に対する感性が磨かれるからです。

    I think the greatest invention is TV.

    TV enables us to watch things which are happening in distant places.
    
For example, when we eat dinner at home, we can watch soccer games from Germany or animals from other countries.
    Unlike pictures, TV can send out lively images in motion.
    So TV helps us understand things more clearly.

    Therefore, I think the greatest invention is TV.                                           

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